Part 9 – The Final Hot Dog
The applause faded slowly.
Luis stepped down from the stage, cheeks warm, heart pounding like he’d just climbed a mountain.
Milo ran up and hugged him tight around the waist.
“You sounded like one of the people on TV,” he whispered.
“But better, ‘cause you meant it.”
Luis chuckled, brushing his hand over the boy’s hair.
“You think Lucky was proud?”
They both turned.
The old collie was asleep under the table, chin resting on his paws, red bandana bunched near one ear.
He hadn’t stirred through the ceremony, but Luis knew —
Somewhere deep in that slowing heart, Lucky was listening.
They drove home under a sky full of stars.
The city had quieted.
Even the stoplights blinked slowly, as if tired from clapping too.
When they reached their street, Luis parked in front of the house and just sat there.
For once, he didn’t feel like rushing inside.
He wanted to hold onto this moment a little longer.
Milo dozed off in the passenger seat, mouth slightly open, hand still clinging to the small plaque.
Lucky rested on the backseat, curled like he used to when Rosa was alive — safe, tucked in, belonging.
Luis whispered, mostly to himself,
“We made it, Rosa. Somehow.”
The next morning, a soft knock on the door pulled Luis from the kitchen.
He opened it to find a man with white hair and a crutch, standing with a small smile.
“Luis Alvarez?”
“Yes?”
“Name’s Raymond. I served with your brother, Ben, in ‘Nam. Saw the news segment. Been trying to find you for years.”
Luis froze.
Ben had died in 1971.
Shot down in a firefight near the Mekong.
His letters had stopped suddenly — no warning, no goodbye.
Raymond reached into his coat and pulled out an old dog tag, worn smooth around the edges.
“He told me to give this to his family if anything ever happened.
It’s late. Real late. But when I saw your name, I knew I had to try.”
Luis took the tag in trembling fingers.
Held it like it might fall apart.
“I thought it was lost forever.”
Raymond looked past him into the house, smiled at the photo on the wall.
“You’re a good man. Just like your brother said you’d be.”
That night, after Milo had gone to bed, Luis stepped onto the porch with Lucky.
The dog lay at his feet, breathing slow and shallow.
The vet had warned them this might happen — post-surgery fatigue, a heart that was simply too old.
Luis didn’t cry.
He just sat, wrapped in his flannel, holding the dog’s leash in one hand and his brother’s tag in the other.
The world was quiet except for the distant hum of traffic and the occasional hoot of an owl.
Then the screen door creaked.
Milo stepped out, holding a paper tray from the kitchen.
Two hot dogs.
One with ketchup. One plain.
“For me and Lucky,” he said.
He sat beside Luis, leaned his head against his father’s arm.
Then reached down and broke off half the plain hot dog, holding it out to Lucky.
The old dog sniffed it.
Didn’t move at first.
Then, with visible effort, he lifted his head.
Took the piece.
Chewed once.
Swallowed.
His tail gave a soft wag.
Milo smiled, but his eyes shimmered.
“He still likes ‘em. Even if he’s tired.”
Luis rested his hand on the boy’s back.
“He’ll never stop liking them. He just… might not have room for many more.”
Milo was quiet a long time.
Then he nodded.
“That’s okay. We’ll make the last ones count.”
As the wind shifted and the porch light buzzed faintly,
Luis leaned back and looked up at the stars.
Some were faint. Some bright.
Some flickered like they weren’t sure if they wanted to stay.
And he thought,
If love could be measured in steps walked, in hot dogs shared, in signs held high in the rain…
Then Lucky had lived a hundred lifetimes.
The next morning, Lucky was too weak to get up.
Luis carried him to the patch of grass where he used to nap in the sun.
Milo sat beside him, reading from a book about firefighters — Lucky’s favorite, or so he’d always claimed.
When the sun reached its highest point,
The dog closed his eyes.
Gave one last sigh.
And slipped away.
Luis and Milo buried him in the yard beneath the fig tree Rosa planted years ago.
They wrapped him in the same red bandana.
Milo placed the last half of a hot dog in his blanket.
“For the road,” he whispered.
“In case he gets hungry where he’s going.”
Luis placed the old collar beside it.
And for a long while, they just stood there.
No tears.
Not right then.
Only quiet.
And gratitude.
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